SH Comments
Reged: Feb 16 2004
Posts: 1056
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This thread is for comments about Surface Properties, by Joanne Merriam.
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Eh. I love the other work of hers that SH has published. The verbs and images used here aren't as strong, which makes this not her best piece. I would like to see her attempt a villanelle again, but using that kind of muscle & flex.
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